Well. Yesterday I wrote my first English post. I think it is good to
evaluate this post. To evaluate the quality of it and to evaluate what I feel about the post. It is obvious that I write silly (sillyly?),
since I don't know the exact meaning of all the English words. The
English language is spoken by so much more people than Dutch. I am
clumsier, and more people could see my clumsiness. Brrr.
I have learned that I should keep my posts simple. I tend to let my
thinking go everywhere, while I write these posts. While meandering in
my native language (I mean Dutch), I can write posts that are still
understandable (for me anyway). My English translations of this
strange poetry are too hermetic. Even these last two sentences are too
hermetic, I am affraid.
And last post had a picture of a babyface, but with my eyes, my nose
and my mouth. The original babyface had a very open expression,
specially the mouth and the eyes. My eyes and mouth in the babyface
showed shame and fear, probably the shame and fear of a 43 year old
man. This new picture is made of the same babyface. I stole the eyes
and mouth and placed them in my face.
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